Roller coaster Ride.

In our class we have been writing narratives. This is one I have written.
<--- Here's a comic strip I have drawn.

Goodnight I said to my mum. I took off my robe and wore the best clothes I had and waited for my friends to call. We were going to the theme park, it was dark and freezing cold. They called me up and told me to meet them outside. I crept out the window and got into the car. And off we went, to the theme park.

I was really having fun. Until we went onto the rollercoaster. Only a few of us went on the ride started I was scared to death, I didn’t want to go on I regretted it from the beginning. I was screaming loud, tears were coming down my face. The loop was coming up, I just wanted to go off. I was screaming out “Nooo”. When we got up to the loop, the ride had stopped.

We were all scared, they couldn’t make the ride go again. News reporters had come with their cameras and stuff. I wondered if my mum was watching this. All of a sudden out of nowhere came a man who came and saved us. He brang us down one by one, but no one knew who he was. Some of us got interviewed from the News Reporter, I was one of them.

That was the end of it. We all went home, I snuck back into my room. My mum was standing there, she looked mad at me. All of sudden she ran up to me and hugged me. She was happy that I was safe, she wanted to look for the dude to thank him. But in a way she was angry at me as well for sneaking out. She saw me on the news. I was happy to be home, she told me to ask her first instead of sneaking home.

Thanks to Jaylee for helping me :)